…I’m totally changing them. Maybe. Okay, and not totally — just rearranging some of the scenes to give the opening more oomph.
I think oomph is good.
But still basically the same, as far as content goes — and if I can make it work. I hadn’t intended to change those chapters all that much, but I had an a-ha! moment tonight, thanks to crankyreader. I really like the idea of the change — we’ll just see if I can pull it off. I won’t be able to tell until I actually try it.
Which is also a long way to say that my editor just told me that copy-edits are on the way, and that the revisions I’ve been working on and the copy-edits (including all queries and minor revisions from that end) are all due by the 18th. Which means that I will be absent from the blog quite a bit over the next week or so.